Speaking
Q1
Me
personally I believe that I pay for to engage in outdoor activities some people now agree with my dear because they might think that outer activities is just a waste of time but I believe that it's really important for people to act outdoor one thing that comes to my mind when I get this question is it can actually help them in many ways for example an outer activities have people to have a chance to interact with others and they can run how to get along with other people in person
Teacher
I think it's better for me to take part in outdoor activities rather than engaging indoor activities some people would not agree with my idea because they might think that engaging in indoor activities is more relaxing but I believe that it's really important for me to take part in outdoor activities one thing that comes to my mind when I get this question is that it can actually help me in many ways for example I can have some time to refresh Myself by taking part in outdoor activities but when I engage in indoor activities I would not have so much fun so I would say that it's better for me to take part in outdoor activities rather than engaging indoor activities.
Q2
Me
according to the reading the university doesn't know said they're going to install library book drop machines for student the man in the conversation thinks that it's a really good idea for two reasons the first reason he support this plan is that the library now is located on the east side which is very far from most of classes so they have have to go to library on to return the book with 30 minutes so it is just a waste of time and the second reason she think it helps student in many way is that they can avoid charging fee if they return the book after Library office hour because they can return the book The Machine so he can say hi in
Teacher
according to the reading the university has announced that they're going to install library book drop machines for students use the man in the conversation thinks that is a good idea for two reasons the first reason he supports this new plan is that the library is located far from the dorms and buildings so students have to walk for 30 minutes to return their books he thinks that it's just a waste of time the second reason he thinks this will help students in many ways is that students use the library books past the closing time and they have to pay a charge for late return but he thinks that this new plan will help students to save a lot of time, money and effort for these reasons he thinks that the university should install library book drop machines for students' use so he thinks that the University's new plan is a good idea.
Q3
Me
according to the reading the plant our location referred to that plant living in Paris environment have to complete a large portion of available energy to survive functions and the professor describe two examples to explain this concept first you start the topic by talking about young female escort they could reproduce but only half of them do this is because they have to save energy for another purpose on the other hand order female they do not go anymore so they can spend more energy to reproduce and even they can produce Offspring as it twice as young female
Teacher
according to the reading the principal of allocation is that any energy that is devoted to one function will be unavailable for other functions. the professor describe an example to explain the principle of alllocation First he starts the topic by talking about a study with red squirrels in this study the researchers found that only about half of the young females produced Offspring and none of them did more than once per year this is because they are still developing physically and they have less energy available to spend on reproduction and then the professor continues the lecture by describing the older female squirrel are no longer growing so 100% of them produced Offspring and their litters were heavier this is the example that demonstrates the principle of allocation.
Q4
Me
in the structure the professor describe what non-propriate organization do for community and the professors start the topic by talking about child welfare organization they use the media to make people aware of the poverty all many many children is in danger of poverty so they try to educate people and they encourage people to do something like registration and donation and she continue the lecture by describing of using a problem yes government report that almost three million children is in danger of abusing and they are neglected so they this organization try to do something like counseling and providing shelter
Teacher
in this lecture the professor describes how non-profit organizations can contribute to the community First she start the topic by talking about the fact that those organizations can raise public awareness she gives an example of child welfare to make her point they can convince the media to report problems about child welfare this will help help increase people understanding of child welfare issues. and then the professor continues the lecture by describing that non-profit organizations can take direct action the example Professor explain is a about intervention in situation they can provide counseling to families or a safe temporary environment for children these are the example that demonstrate that how nonprofit organizations can contribute to the community.
Writing
Q1
Me
The reading passage contends that there are several methods to make using coal without harming the environment: converting coal into a gas, static electricity and fabric filters. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points to contradict this argument.
Firstly, the lecturer contends that there are several side-effects on converting coal into a gas. For example, this transformation process requires a lot of fuel which pollutes environment after all. In addition, he mentions that making syngas with ultimate purity involves using much of water. The problem is that the water become polluted during this process. This casts doubt on reading passage's claim that converting coal into a gas is a environmentally friendly.
Secondly, the lecturer points out that using static electricity as an alternative method has a serious disadvantage. The process generates a lot of carbon dioxide by trapping heat in the air. Though it might be beneficial from keeping particles of dust from polluting the air, the drawback offsets this benefit. This counters the reading passage's claim that using static electricity could be better option.
Lastly, the lecturer maintains that it needs a lot of efforts to maintain utilizing fabric filter overall. For example, it require fans, one of equipment for the process, which rely on so much energy. he says that it is not cost-efficient option to solve this problem. This refutes the reading passage's claim that fabric filters is highly effective technique.
GPT
Score: 4 out of 5
Feedback:
Your response comprehensively contrasts the points made in the reading passage with the viewpoints of the lecturer. The structure is clear, and you provide specific details and examples to support each point of contention. However, there are a few linguistic and syntactical errors which could be improved upon.
Suggestions for Improvement:
Pay attention to grammar, particularly article usage and verb conjugation.
Consider refining sentence structure for clarity.
Be cautious with preposition choices.
Revised Answer:
The reading passage posits several environmentally friendly methods for utilizing coal, which include converting coal into gas, employing static electricity, and using fabric filters. Contrarily, the lecturer raises concerns against these methods.
Firstly, the lecturer challenges the idea of coal conversion into gas, highlighting some detrimental side effects. For instance, the conversion process necessitates a significant amount of fuel, which in turn pollutes the environment. Furthermore, achieving optimal purity in syngas production involves extensive water use, which becomes contaminated during the process. This casts doubt on the reading passage's assertion that converting coal into a gas is environmentally benign.
Secondly, while static electricity might help in preventing dust particles from contaminating the air, the lecturer notes a major disadvantage. The process releases significant amounts of carbon dioxide, thereby trapping heat in the atmosphere. This offsets any potential benefits and challenges the reading passage's claim that static electricity is a viable alternative.
Lastly, the lecturer argues that the use of fabric filters, though deemed effective by the reading passage, requires high maintenance. As an illustration, fans, essential equipment for the process, consume vast amounts of energy, rendering this solution economically inefficient.
Teacher
Answer
The reading passage contends that methods of using coal do not damage the environment on the other hand the lecturer brings up several points that contradict this argument.
First, the lecturer claims that gasification is not a good solution heating coal requires the burning of fossil fuels, which leads to harmful emissions. In addition, the waste pollutes water supplies. this casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that transforming coal into gas is a promising way to minimize the harm of coal
next, the lecturer contends that the use of static electricity is no better. the collection plates only gather up waste particles such as soot and ash but not carbon dioxide. given that carbon dioxide has the worst environmental impact, extracting soot and ash out of the air has a minor effect this counters the reading passage's claim that using static electricity prevents the waste from contaminating the air.
Finally, the lecture maintains that fabric filters have a high maintenance cost, so they are not a realistic solution. one problem is that they have a short life span, so they must be replaced often. another is that they rely on large fans, and operating these fans takes a lot of energy. this refutes the reading passage's claim that fabric filters can efficiently reduce coal's environmental impact.
Tip
Voca
drawback disadvantage demerit
~의가격 the cost of the expense of ~
A is expensive A is costly / B is inexpensive B is cheap
An alternative method is to use a form of static electricity
= Using static electricity prevents the waste from contaminating the air.
Fabric filters are one more option for reducing coal's impact
= Fabric filters can efficiently reduce coal's environmental impact.
Q2
ME
I understand why Nathaniel maintains that traditions have to be kept with original status. But, in my opinion, i believe that traditions have to be adapted and evolved constantly. This is because, ironically, it makes traditions sustained forever. In general, traditions itself mean nothing if they are forgotten from people. For example, the traditional costume in Korea, Hanbok used to be in danger of demise because young generation were not interested in it. However, The Korean government tried to change some aspect of it to fit together with modern clothes. So they could survive. Furthermore, be the best item among foreigners.
GPT
Score: 4 out of 5
Feedback:
Your response is structured well and clearly contrasts the viewpoint of Nathaniel with your own. You effectively use an example of the Korean traditional costume to support your viewpoint. There are, however, a few linguistic and syntactical mistakes.
Suggestions for Improvement:
Be cautious about grammar and phrasing.
The statement "traditions itself mean nothing" could be rephrased for clarity.
Consider clarifying or expanding on the idea that when adapted, traditions can appeal to a broader audience or new generation, ensuring their longevity.
Revised Answer:
I understand why Nathaniel believes that traditions should be preserved in their original form. However, I think traditions need to be adapted and evolved to stay relevant. Paradoxically, by adapting them, we can ensure their survival. If traditions become disconnected from the present, they risk being forgotten. For instance, the traditional Korean costume, Hanbok, was losing its appeal among the younger generation. However, when the Korean government modernized certain aspects of it, making it blend seamlessly with contemporary clothing, its popularity surged. Now, it's not only embraced by the younger generation but also highly sought after by foreigners.