Writing
Q1
ME
The reading passage contends that there are several serious issues for a manned mission to Mars: Dust posing a serious threat to spaceship and astronauts, psychological impact of the lengthy trip to Mars and the financial burden of it. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points to contradict this argument.
Firstly, he contends that dust issue could be overcome by the new-technology, sound wave. When the machine makes a sound wave, it could blow away dust attached to the solar panels and crew's spacesuits. The higher pitch from it, the easier dust can removed. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that dust is a serious obstacle for the exploration.
Secondly, the lecturer points out that psychological issues of the astronauts during the mission could be resolved. Before boarding on the spaceship, they can be trained for adjusting long isolation for a long time. Also, during the mission on the spaceship, they can use the program which includes video guide to deal with several psychological disorders. This counters the reading passage's claim that the psychological impact of the lengthy trip will be huge obstacle.
Lastly, the lecturer maintains that the financial projection for the expedition can not be seen as an issue. If this were problem, many nations wouldn't have participated in the project. But, many nations have invested in Mars exploration for the future. Also, there are many international partnerships. It benefits on the aspect of the nation's status as well as technological advancement in the long term. This refutes the reading passage's claim that it will be burden to the nation in terms of financial status.
GPT
Score: 4 out of 5
Feedback:
Your essay demonstrates a good understanding of the contrasting viewpoints presented in the reading and lecture. You have effectively summarized the main points from both the reading and the lecture, showing a clear relationship between them. Your essay is organized well, with each paragraph focusing on a distinct point of contention. There are, however, a few areas where clarity and grammatical accuracy can be improved.
Suggestions for Improvement:
Ensure clarity in sentence construction to prevent confusion.
Avoid redundancy in phrasing, like "adjusting long isolation for a long time."
Use a variety of transitions to improve the flow of your essay.
Correct minor grammatical errors and improve word choices for better clarity.
Modified Essay:
The reading passage highlights several potential challenges for a manned mission to Mars: the risk posed by dust, the psychological challenges of the extended journey, and the significant financial costs. Conversely, the lecturer refutes each of these concerns.
Firstly, the lecturer suggests that the problem of Martian dust can be mitigated with the use of sound wave technology. By generating specific sound waves, it's possible to repel the dust from solar panels and astronauts' spacesuits. The efficacy of this technology increases with higher pitch sound waves, casting doubt on the reading's assertion that dust is a major hindrance to Mars exploration.
Regarding the psychological challenges of the lengthy trip, the lecturer argues that astronauts can be effectively prepared for this. Prior to departure, they could undergo extensive training to adapt to prolonged periods of isolation. Moreover, while onboard, astronauts would have access to specialized programs, including video guides, to address potential psychological concerns. This challenges the reading's perspective that the psychological toll of the journey is insurmountable.
Lastly, the lecturer questions the assertion that the cost of the mission is prohibitive. The very fact that multiple nations are actively investing in Mars exploration implies that the potential benefits, both in terms of national prestige and long-term technological advances, outweigh the immediate costs. International partnerships further distribute the financial burden, rendering the reading's concerns about financial strain less compelling.
Teacher
Answer
The reading passage states that a manned mission to Mars is problematic. On the other hand, the lecturer explains how this concern can be alleviated.
First, the lecturer points out that the dust on Mars can be controlled using sound technology. Sound waves are able to dislodge dust particles that would hinder machinery. At high pitches, the sound waves levitate dust so that it can be blown away air. this casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that the dust would cause many problems for the crew and their equipment.
Next, the lecturer contends that the psychological problems that are likely to color on such a lengthy voyage are manageable. The astronauts learn how to cope with the isolation from friends and family. Also, a counseling program will be available during the mission. This counters the reading passage's claim that the extended isolation would have too great a psychological influence (Too 형 a 명) on the crew members.
Finally, the lecturer maintains that the cost of a Mars mission will not prevent it from occurring. if several nations pooled their resources, they could afford to fund the mission. In addition, the resulting technological advances would make the investment worthwhile. This refutes the reading passage's claim that the financial commitment would deter nations from devoting their resources to a Mars mission.
Tip
문제 잘 보기!
듣기 필기할 때 How 를 필기하기 (누가 어떻게 해결하는지?)
문제 해결형 템플릿
The reading passage states that ~ (문제가 있다.)
On the other hand, the lecturer explains how this concern can be alleviated.
First, the speaker argues that ~ 해결 방법들 나열
this is in response to the reading passage's point that ~
Second, according to the lecturer, 해결 방법들 나열
This shows solutions to the reading passage's concern that ~
The final point made by the lecturer is that 해결 방법
This addresses the reading passage's problem that ~
또는 반박형 템플릿에서 the speaker argues that ~문제 해결된다. 이렇게 쓰기
구체적으로 해결 방법을 적어야지 만점
dislodge 단어 모르면 해결하다 비슷한 단어로 계속 적어가기
too 형 a 명
the extended isolation would have too great a psychological influence on the crew members
Voca
해결하다 solve show solutions to be in response to address overcome resolve
다루다 deal with cope with handle
경감시키다 relieve alleviate
공중에 뜨다 levitate
형용사 costly
제거하다 dislodge
분배하다 Dispense
~방해하다 interfere with interrupt disrupt hinder prevent keep deter distract A from B
특히 in particular to be specific
커다란 huge enormous great heavy
~가격 the expense of ~ the cost of~ high/low 가격이 the cost is high (expensive X)
장기적으로 in the long run/term
Q2
I understand why Amanda thinks that making the news more interesting could attract more people to view it. But I believe that news originally have to focus on delivering information rather than entertainment to their viewers. In general, Every media has their own characteristic of contents which should be considered when distributing them. For example, News has contents with aspect of publicity which most people expect. So they should mostly focus on authenticity of the facts. On the other hand, For those who want enjoy fun and entertaining contents, social media like Facebook, instagram could be chosen. So, I believe that news should not be used as a tool for fun.
GPT
Score: 4 out of 5
Feedback:
Your essay effectively communicates your stance on the subject and you make clear arguments to support your position. Your structure is logical, with an introduction, main body points, and a conclusion. However, there are a few areas for improvement, particularly in clarity, coherence, and minor grammar corrections.
Suggestions for Improvement:
Make sure your sentences are clear and concise to convey your point without any ambiguity.
Use a wider range of vocabulary and transitions to ensure your essay flows smoothly from one point to another.
Correct minor grammatical errors and improve word choice.
Modified Essay:
While I understand Amanda's perspective that making news more engaging might draw a larger audience, I firmly believe that the primary purpose of news is to deliver accurate information, not entertainment. Each media platform has its own unique content and purpose, which should guide its delivery.
For instance, the news is expected to maintain a sense of objectivity and authenticity, primarily due to its public nature. Viewers rely on the news for factual updates on world events, expecting the information presented to be accurate and unbiased. Thus, the primary focus should be on the integrity and accuracy of the content.
Conversely, platforms like Facebook and Instagram cater to audiences seeking more lighthearted and entertaining content. These platforms thrive on user engagement and entertainment. Therefore, people wanting a blend of fun and information often turn to such social media sites.
In conclusion, while there's a place for entertainment in the media landscape, news platforms should prioritize factual accuracy over amusement.
Reading
Test4 Part2
Answer
1. D (V)
2. B (V)
3. B (V)
4. C (V)
5. A (V)
6. B (V) fuels = heat up, All, Only, Must, Never 선택지 주의!!
7. D (V)
8. A (V)
9. B (V)
10.C/E/F (V)
Tip
맨 마지막 문제 (key sentence) -> 전체 읽기 전에 훑어보기
Voca
Prehistoric: Stone age (구석기) bronze age (청동기) iron age (철기)
우려, 불안 apprehension
in tandem with ~와 결합한
distress 괴롭히다
intriguing 흥미로운,
yearn 불쌍히 여기다.
offshore 근해, 앞바다
consume: 소비하다, 먹다
균열, 틈 crevice, crack, fissure
놀라운 staggering astounding
Listening
Test 6-2
1 주제 문제점 C (V)
2 단어 강조 C (V) the interesting part ~~ 집중!!
3 제안 - 해결책 C/D (X, B/D) excavate 단어 놓침, structure = design 패러프레이징, technology 워딩 없음 (advancement -> 같은 단어 사용 함정)
4 function D (V) 단어 몰라도 앞 뒤 문맥으로 선택지 내용 잘 찍었음
5 제안 - 해결책 B (V)
6 주제 B (V)
7 이유 B/D (X, A/D) (필기를 너무 많이 했음.. 어떤 사물이 제공하는 것에 대한 키워드 food, shetler 키워드 놓치지 말기!!)
8 이유 D (X, C) 일조량 = amount of sunlight, the time of day: 시각 (낮의 길이 X)
9 function B (V)
10 연구결과 A (V)
11 증거 C (V)
Voca
anthropology 인류학
literate: 글을 읽고 쓸 줄 아는
counterargument: 반론
engorssing: 흥미를 끄는, 마음을 사로잡는 (engorss: 몰두하다)
excavate: 발굴하다
run into a brick wall: 난관에 부딪히다
dearth: 부족
go out on a limb: 위험을 감수하다
lost cause: 가망이 없는 것
I wouldn't go that far: 그렇게까지 멀리 가지 않겠어
all for: ~을 지지하는
a wild goose chase: 부질업는 노력
mammal: 포유동물
coniferous: 침엽수의
deciduous: 낙엽성의
that being said: 그럼에도 불구하고
undergrowth: 덤불
trail: 자국, 흔적
facilitate: 도움을 주다, 쉽게 하다
sporadical: 드문드문한
groom: 손질하다, 다듬다
molt: 털갈이
mottled: 얼룩덜룩한
patchy: 듬성듬성한
blanket: 전면을 덮다.
shed: ~벗다
shrub: 관목
keep in check ~억제하다, 억누르다.