How about this answer for TOEFL integrated speaking?
Estimate the answer and provide scores according to the guideline.
the biology research Club has announced that the department representative of the club will interview applicants to evaluate their suitability and the man thinks that this is not a good idea for two reasons first he points out that knowing about biology should not be an issues because students could be getting informed of biology through the activity of the club which is the point of Club second even though he partially agree with that the last seminar by students is not so good but most of them were filled with experts like visiting Professor so that should not be an issues.
Delivery: 3/4 - Your speed and intonation are adequate, but there are some minor hesitations and word repetition that slightly affect fluency.
Language Use: 3/4 - Generally, your grammar and vocabulary usage is fine, but there are some slightly awkward sentence constructions that could be improved for clarity.
Topic Development: 3.5/4 - Your ideas are clear and logically organized, but your arguments could be elaborated further with additional details or examples.
Total score: 9.5/12
Feedback:
Instead of saying "knowing about biology should not be an issues", you could use a more active voice and say "a student's current knowledge of biology shouldn't be an issue".
The sentence "most of them were filled with experts like visiting Professor so that should not be an issues" is somewhat unclear. It would be better to specify what "them" and "that" refer to for clarity.
Revised response:
"The Biology Research Club has announced that the department's representative will interview applicants to evaluate their suitability. However, the man disagrees with this plan for two primary reasons. Firstly, he argues that a deep understanding of biology shouldn't be a prerequisite for joining, as the club's activities are intended to impart this knowledge. Secondly, while he concedes that some student-led seminars may not have been up to par, he highlights that most of these sessions featured experts such as visiting professors, which should offset any concerns about the quality of the club's offerings."