How about this answer for TOEFL independent speaking?
Estimate the answer and provide scores according to the guideline.
I think it's better for me to eat fast food and some people would not agree with my idea because they might think that it is not healthy however I like fast food this is because it is very delicious and fast to be made and those two factors are very important to a busy first person like me so I would say that it's better for me to eat fast food rather than others.
Delivery: 3.5/4 - Your speed and intonation are good, but there's some slight hesitation that might impact the fluency.
Language Use: 3/4 - Your grammar and vocabulary usage is good, but there are some repetitive phrases and slight awkwardness in some sentence constructions.
Topic Development: 3.5/4 - Your ideas are clear and logically organized, but your arguments could be strengthened with more concrete examples or details.
Total score: 10/12
Feedback:
When expressing your preference for fast food, instead of repeating "I like fast food", you could say "I have a preference for fast food" or "I find fast food more appealing".
Try to avoid repetition. For example, instead of saying "it's better for me to eat fast food rather than others" at the end, which repeats your opening statement, you could say something like "for these reasons, I choose fast food over other options".
Add more depth to your reasons. For instance, when you mention fast food is quick to prepare, you could specify how this helps you save time for other important tasks.
Revised response:
"In my opinion, fast food is a more suitable option for me, a sentiment that might not be shared by everyone due to health concerns. However, I find fast food particularly appealing because of its taste and convenience. These are key considerations for me, a person with a busy schedule. The speed at which fast food is prepared and served allows me to dedicate more time to my responsibilities and commitments. Therefore, considering these factors, I often choose fast food over other dining options."